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Third Feedback

The task for the third peer review was to present a game pitch based around the work that I have been doing, I have to show the game loops, storyboards, concept ideas and research to give my peers more a visual reference to what my game idea is going to be like.

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These are the slides that I presented to my group of 4 in my peer review, I had the review with Mikas, Valka and Daniella. In my review I explained that I split the essential expereince into two ideas, and from that I created seperate gameplay loops and storyboards for each of them, They seem to have liked what I have done so far. Here are some of the feedback that they have given me.

Feedback:

  • Consider both ideas

  • Research the narrative of both game ideas

  • Trying to implement your own memoried

  • Design the narrative of the game

  • Make moodboards for both idea's

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